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Description
This picture is from a scene in All Quiet on The Western Front.
Enjoy and critique!!
EDIT
I fixed the grey area to make it look smoother.
EDIT TWO
I tried making it look more faded out without editing my art. I make the person more angled towards the door.
Enjoy and critique!!
EDIT
I fixed the grey area to make it look smoother.
EDIT TWO
I tried making it look more faded out without editing my art. I make the person more angled towards the door.
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Comments14
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactNot a bad effort, although there are several anatomical issues that I can see.
I really like the way you have done the sheet on the bed, and the angled door looks quite effective, giving the image a dream-like feel.
On the other hand, the anatomy of the person doesn't look right. The top of the arms are too small, and the head is the wrong shape - it's too wide and the angle doesn't look quite right. The jawline also looks uneven.
I like that you've done some simple shading on this. Its' very effective on the shirt, but less effective on the skin.
Overall though, good work!